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0 posted 2001-10-19 11:36 PM


ok i just thought i'd give yall a little laugh. so i'm putting this one back up. so all you guys get offended oh well! lol! j/k (read the bottom)
   -robin

Dating a guy is like riding a horse.
You fall off,you get back on.
you get dumped,you find a new guy.

guys can be very stubborn,
so you teach to listen.
with horses you saddle them up and make them listen.

guys like to rush into things a lot of the time.
but then also there are some who like to go slow.
with horses you can pick what ever pace you wanna go,
you are in control.
most guys won't let you control anything.

Robin  

ok if this offends any guy that reads this i'm sorry. it's just my opinion. please don't take me seriously. except you acire! hahahahhahahahahaha

-peace love and chicken grease!
robin

i'm just dumb!! i can't do nuthin right!

© Copyright 2001 Robin Hill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-20 11:31 AM


hey people why ain't you respondin to my poem?

i'm just dumb!! i can't do nuthin right!

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2 posted 2001-10-22 09:09 AM


grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr fine don't read it! just thought yall needed a laugh!

i'm just dumb!! i can't do nuthin right!

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3 posted 2001-10-27 08:21 AM


I read it.   Very cute Robin. lol  
Guys....what would we make fun of without them?   j/k
Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

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4 posted 2001-10-27 03:03 PM


You'd probly make fun of democracy, govermen systems, etc.

I dunno, I didn't tkae a large offense to the poem- cuz it doesn't really describe me inpaticular. And the thing about choosing paces and such, if a guy lets you choose the pace, its because he really cares for you and doesn't want to ruin it- so is that really something to insult (even if you are joking)  

                 -Dreys

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5 posted 2001-10-27 04:56 PM


LMAO!!! This is great!

Love me, because I am great (greater than Zu, anyway!)

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6 posted 2001-10-28 11:38 AM


cute hun.
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7 posted 2001-10-28 03:50 PM


LOL!! this is wonderful!!
*pixie*

-=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=-

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8 posted 2001-10-30 01:40 PM


ya like it huh! i love this one it's so funny!

i'm just dumb!! i can't do nuthin right!

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9 posted 2001-11-03 09:01 AM


Very good, very true to hehehheheh liked it alot
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10 posted 2001-11-03 10:57 PM


lol
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11 posted 2001-11-05 03:49 AM


what can i say men! gotta love em!

i'm just dumb!! i can't do nuthin right!

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12 posted 2001-11-05 02:00 PM


I love how you compared horses to men..hahah i absolutely loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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13 posted 2001-11-05 09:31 PM


great poem... it really gave me the pick me up that i needed!!! Thanks for the smile!  
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14 posted 2001-11-05 11:42 PM


This is really funny.

                           Dawn

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15 posted 2001-11-07 04:37 AM


well i don't think guys are the sme as horses it was just what came to mind that was so common between them lol!

Cherish is QUEEN!! and dastard is her slave!

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16 posted 2001-11-12 12:58 PM


Imagine what we think of girls  

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?


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17 posted 2001-11-12 03:54 PM


Acire is sooooo right...

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

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18 posted 2001-11-15 03:19 PM


acire hush your mouth!

Cherish is QUEEN!! and dastard is her slave!

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