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fulanodetal3684 Junior Member
since 2001-10-10
Posts 19 |
from the center of nature(inside) a point appears that has always been there from the center of life(outside) a point appears,that since then, has been there from the center of oneself(inside) a point appears that has always been there from the center of the eyes(outside) a point appears,that since then, has been there you developed the inside I manufactured the outside you established the truth I blended in perceptions and came up with the word fool which ain't wrong, but ain't right; a blessing discovered documentation which in between lines, started fights... well, the inside has always been a perfect circle indivisible, unsimplifiable phenom abstract spark of fire while the outside is the seed and light of science frayed are its ends we are to make them blend and the linear rope is longer each time as space persists in time, till the circle is conceived from our insights, so that the outside melts with the inside (and both circles, in singular, orbit the same) parallel creatures of universal shrine; then the days shall be days and the nights shall be nights... |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
great poem the first stanzas was actually to guide us to what you had in store excellent way to do things first time I believe I've seen in that form keep em coming là où est mon amour? |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I agree with acire! Cool format! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOh man this is amazing! so so so so very amazing. i fallen in love with this one- and its your fault  ...i loved the way you described you and the reader/person. it sounded almost god-like towards the end...i think you did an AWESOME job on this. you do have very deep thoughts within this..and im glad you shared this cuz its really good! |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
-wow- this is really amazing. Loving the format, loving it all, actually. great write! |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
BUMP! The feeling of Sleepiness when you're not in bed, and can't get there, is the meanest feeling in the world.-- Edgar Waston Howe |
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