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Ender
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0 posted 2001-10-19 09:49 AM


Marriage, as a thought
Sure is a lot
Think, as I do
Do we have a clue?

The future, it shall be
Let us wait, let us see
Predict, we have done
Now, time for the fun

Together, time is spent
We will know if this is meant
Us, we shall be
Together, from sea to sea

Wonderful day, when it appears
Our love will be with many tears
Together, I want to be
With you, my bride to be

Hopes, high as they are
Just think how far
My love, endless for you
I hope you love me too

Now wait, we must
For our life ahead, full of lust
The future, unknown
Only to be wished and shown

There, we are for each other
Like a baby bird and its mother
There, we shall stay
Until that wonderful, beautiful day

If I could be anything in the world, I would want to be your tear.  I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheek, and die on your lips.  -Ender

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Dark Enchantress
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1 posted 2001-10-19 09:58 AM


Hmm.. what can I say other than that I really, really, really enjoyed reading this. To be honest normally I hate "mushy" poems, but this one I liked. Isn't love beautiful?

There are always answers as long as you're open enough to accept the answers you were not looking for.

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2 posted 2001-10-19 11:58 AM


im beginning to think you are someone else..someone i know quite well...either that or your goin through EXACTLY the same thing as me(and my wonderful little Josh, whom by the way i think you might be)
do i know you? are you josh?
hmmm maybe its just my mind playin tricks...lol

"If I made you mad today, would you still love me tomorrow?"-Incubus

anonymousfemale
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3 posted 2001-10-20 06:01 AM


My opinion of marriage is that you get less of a sentence for murder...

Thanks for the read. I don't like love poetry but it was nice.

~AF~

Maybe I'm just a girl...interupted.

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