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Ender
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0 posted 2001-10-19 01:17 AM


I wish it weren’t true
I wish we weren’t through
But that is how life is
But maybe, just a kiss

Just a kiss to say goodbye
Lean on me, I sing a lullaby
Together tonight, is the last
We both wish it not fast

Cherish, is the kiss
For it will be missed
All the time spent together
Remembered, forever

Not forever is good-bye
Please, princess, don’t be shy
I will still be there
Your side in my care

Forever, love will always be
You have opened my eyes to see
Be, where would I?
My life, full of lies

Memories, forever
Love, together
All of it coincides
We must move on, our very lives

For you, I love
But give me a shove
Leave you, I cannot
To think that very thought

Good-bye my princess
Not forever, goodness
There, I will always be
For you to look, and see

If I could be anything in the world, I would want to be your tear.  I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheek, and die on your lips.  -Ender

© Copyright 2001 Richard Melick - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-19 01:42 AM


I dont normally enjoy love-type poems, but this was really nice
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2 posted 2001-10-19 08:46 AM


This was a really good poem! You expressed yourself nicely...ah..love...<33 Good job!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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3 posted 2001-10-19 09:22 AM


you've done a wonderful job with this one. Love it!

Charisma

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4 posted 2001-10-19 10:26 AM


aww this was sweet. flowed very well. keep it up  

*dq

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baby0508
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5 posted 2001-10-19 01:22 PM


That is a really sad poem, I am on your side, and i know how you feel. Hope things get better for you.  


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