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Zukene_Chic
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0 posted 2001-10-19 01:08 AM


I feel fat and ugly
Is this what its like to be pregnant?
I'm all alone and hated
Is this how it feels to live?
My life is falling apart
Is this how its s'posed to be?
Pain is all I know
Is this all there is?

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1 posted 2001-10-19 02:20 AM


you did well on expressing the "needing answers" the somewhat desperation...hope all is well.

=)

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2 posted 2001-10-19 08:44 AM


This was such a sad poem...::hugs::

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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3 posted 2001-10-19 08:59 AM


((warm hugs))

hope all is well with you. you expressed your feelings quite well.

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4 posted 2001-10-19 09:50 AM


*sighs* I know how you feel all too well. Hang in there and keep your head up...

As for the poem, I really liked it. Short and incredibly meaningful.



P.S. - I don't believe in rules.  

There are always answers as long as you're open enough to accept the answers you were not looking for.

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5 posted 2001-10-20 05:53 AM


No that isn't all there is. I too am searching but you'll find it eventually. Keep looking and keep strong.  

Take care and thanks for sharing your feelings.

~AF~

Maybe I'm just a girl...interupted.

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