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diet coke [100th post!! YAY!!!!]
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diet coke [100th post!! YAY!!!!] |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz 
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Diet coke slowly and surely becomes the blood sweat and tears of my essence. [i have a feeling most won't understand it.] - jen so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
You're right, I don't understand it. Congrats on 100 though!   If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
this is a bit weird..i mean you could interpret in many ways- so many facets are possible. one could be( this is the one that i would take) that youre feeling artifical all over like diet coke, another could be that youre dieting has taken control of your body- in which case i urge you to seek superior help.or that, being a black liquid, you feel really dark inside....it could go on, but ill stop here and congratulate you on your 100th   Congratulations Jen! good poem jen, i enjoyed it a LOT! see the glass crack like a flower opening |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
coke representing something you enjoy/dislike (as realting to life) and the "diet" part hmm, not complete? since diet is taken away from the regular(life)... anwyays that it as you consume as to use symbolism as to drink and it becomes part of you which adds to your essence...yea i SUCK at intrepreting poems..hehe...i FULLY enjoyed thi simple yet quite deep might i say. oh, CONGRATS JENN!!!! welcome to the three digits!..  =) |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I dont understand it either  ...but im jus a lil outta it sometimes!! Or maybe its because i dont like diet coke...oyy...either way CONGRATS ON YOUR 100TH!!!ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I got something out of it, but it's probably not what you meant. I'd say it but I hate to be wrong.  Very interesting.... me likes. And by the way.. congrats.   There are always answers as long as you're open enough to accept the answers you were not looking for. jaimespoetry.blogspot.com [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 10-19-2001).] |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
I think I understand. Bel |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Hm... I like your comment at the beginning, lol. I'll give it a shot. You're describing the effects of the external world of capitalistic cutthroat dealings on your inner self. At any rate, this was a cool poem. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
I think there have been a lot of great ideas, a lot I would NEVER have thought of. When I first read it I thought maybe something along the lines of being a knock off of the original thing, you know, like a spin-off series from a really good television show that has a similar theme but none of the qualities that make the original good... I personally like diet coke...but hey. A great write none the less. ~I haven't memorized all of the cute things to say but I'm working on it~ |
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