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Teen Poetry #5

Confession

hoppy
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

0 posted 2001-10-18 04:17 PM

Take me by the hand
show me why your still here;
why you left me in the sand.
Take away my fear.
Basking in pale moon light;
clouds cover the night;
I see eyes shining bright
as i fall out of sight.

Show my heart why
you dropped it on the floor.
I thought I would die
as you walked out the door.

I hear what you say
when i'm far away;
But I must tell you this way;
Pour toujours je vous aime

---Written by:Hoppy

4-23-00

What is it you have to answer?
But to answer you have to ask?
And to ask you have to speak?
And to speak you have to know,
The answer.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2001-10-18 05:43 PM

~Show my heart why
you dropped it on the floor.
I thought I would die
as you walked out the door.~

Beautiful written, translate your feelings in such a few words. Love it!

Charisma

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

2 posted 2001-10-19 05:36 PM

Good poem ,but, lol...whats

"Pour toujours je vous aime"

hoppy
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

3 posted 2001-10-20 12:34 PM

*LOL* it's french, means "forever i love you"

What is it you have to answer?
But to answer you have to ask?
And to ask you have to speak?
And to speak you have to know,
The answer.

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