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hoppy
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

0 posted 2001-10-17 10:26 PM

touched you once
loved you twice
watched you more
cold as ice
seen you there
your not here
show no emotion
heart stand still
see your eyes
they grow dim
wish you wouldn't
stand by him

What is it you have to answer?
But to answer you have to ask?
And to ask you have to speak?
And to speak you have to know,
The answer.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-10-17 10:30 PM

trying to hit me with the bat?...man that was some hard hitting poem (i can relate)

...wow.

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 10-17-2001).]

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

2 posted 2001-10-17 10:36 PM

geez.

that was pretty damn good.

verrry enjoyable.

thanks for the read.

- jen

so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-10-18 10:17 AM

Wow, that poem really is a slap in the face..i wish she wouldnt stand by him too after reading that!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

hoppy
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

4 posted 2001-10-18 11:54 AM

thank you, thank you...i do love to blow people away with just a few words

i'll grace you with another bit of extraordinary writting later today, in the mean time, enjoy this one.

What is it you have to answer?
But to answer you have to ask?
And to ask you have to speak?
And to speak you have to know,
The answer.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

5 posted 2001-10-18 04:54 PM

wow, i liked this 1 so much, its going in my library. Great job!

Did u ever have the feeling that he meant everything 2 u, yet u meant nothing 2 him?.....~me
~...I can be ur hero baby, I can kiss the pain away...~

~gretchenp34~
Junior Member

since 2001-10-08

Posts 46
Ohio, USA

6 posted 2001-10-18 05:28 PM

whoaaa thats really good! i liked it alot, keep up the great work i wanna see more! i like short poetry better too

Love is like learning to play the piano. First you must learn to play by the rules, then you must forget the rules and play by your heart.

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

7 posted 2001-10-19 01:40 PM

oh man, wow that was great, i could totally relat to it. great work

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

8 posted 2001-10-20 01:17 AM

really great job on this one, so simple yet so true...good job.

~I haven't memorized all of the cute things to say but I'm working on it~

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

9 posted 2001-10-20 04:44 AM

Nice poem, has a catchy rhythm to it.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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