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DarkAngelOfTheStars
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

0 posted 2001-10-17 05:47 PM

ok i know this is long and its probably weird and hard to read but i like it so yeah i posted it hope you like it

~*Forsaken*~

A rebellion against all that is recognized
Against all that is ignored
Bringing light to a dark uncertain secret
I’m standing for myself
Doing what is not accepted,
But is needed for me to live
I’m doing what others wished they could
I am being me
But I am in the dark
Because you hide me
I force you to believe what you don’t want to believe
I force you to hear my screams, but you shut them out
Shut them out
You are close-minded
The government, the world is close-minded
You think alike,
Have no minds of your own
What is wrong for one person,
Is wrong for everyone
You hear, you believe..
Even the lies, you believe..
No proof needed, you just believe
Like a dog on a chain
They drag you around
They pull and you follow,
Without any questions
You follow them around,
In their dark shadows,
Of their dirty world
Unaware of the wrong doings
But against them I stand
I think different
I believe different
I let myself off the chain,
And now I’m a threat
Because I choose NOT to be like you
I choose to be true to my feelings
An alien to this world,
Forced to pretend
But as you drown in the lies of the world
I soar in the beauty of truth
Lies seep through your pours
But truth burns in my eyes
I’m corrupted, and disturbed
But only by the things others are too blind to see
Open your eyes
Become forsaken

Don't make me get my flying monkeys :P

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-10-17 09:24 PM

"Open your eyes
Become forsaken"

quite haunting last lines...thought provoking piece,KAT

wB! and glad to see you post! this piece had a lot to it...and not long at all it was fine. enjoyed it a LOT.

=)

hoppy
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

2 posted 2001-10-17 09:27 PM

those are definatly are haunting last lines...but i do wonder anonymous...exactly what thoughts did it provoke in you?

What is it you have to answer?
But to answer you have to ask?
And to ask you have to speak?
And to speak you have to know,
The answer.

hoppy
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

3 posted 2001-10-17 10:10 PM

those are definatly are haunting last lines...but i do wonder anonymous...exactly what thoughts did it provoke in you?

What is it you have to answer?
But to answer you have to ask?
And to ask you have to speak?
And to speak you have to know,
The answer.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-10-18 10:14 AM

Whoa....this piece was truely amazing!!! ::APPLAUDS::...Great job girl!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

5 posted 2001-10-19 01:34 PM

OMG, wow this is just to awesome to describe, great job on this, i loved this one, its definatly going to my library.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-10-30 06:06 PM

A lot on anger and frustration on this one
Just stick with what you believe
Be strong

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?

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