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Smlie4u87
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since 2001-04-28
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0 posted 2001-10-17 05:22 PM


Hey everyone! I wirte for my best friend, about what I want her to know. Please tell what you think of it, it could really help.

Even though your far away
You will never be forgetin.
In memory and in heart.
You are one of a kind and
only comes along once in a lifetime.
What you have done will
always stay in my memory and in my heart
intel the end of time.
You have a big heart and
with that your dream will true.
You have so much to give.
You've already given so much to me,
and i'm very gateful for it.
Your have touched my heart and others more.
I know that when you grow up and
for full your dream. No one will ever forget
you.  You've been blessed with a very
great gift. And I feel very bessed to have a
best friend like you.


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BlackDove
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Why are you reading this???
1 posted 2001-10-17 05:28 PM


Nice Post!  *keeps it up top for a while longer*  

All the plastic people who live without a care.Try to sit around my table and never bring a chair...

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2 posted 2001-10-18 04:04 AM


This is a great poem, thank you for sharing it with us, I really enjoyed the read and hope to see more of your work soon

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3 posted 2001-10-18 10:24 AM


This was such a sweet poem for your friend...ur giving this to her arent u?? I hope so..im shur she'd love to read it!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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