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BlackDove
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since 2001-10-14
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0 posted 2001-10-17 05:07 PM


     for Megan

I hope I can say the things I've wished I said
To sing myself to sleep and take me back to bed.

I don't know what it is that makes me feel alive.
The words I thought I could contrive.

But you are my wind
I can't see you
But your love you send
You are not here

But I sit here and smile
I haven't told you in a while
You can touch the very part of me
start a brand new spark in me

Now I understand this is not the promised land
they spoke of.
But there's nothing more to be
If you can be the remedy who heals love.

So it's up to me to make
the best of what comes my way
Everything that has been has past
You have my answers
In your looking glass

I Love you when I don't show it
I never think you will know it
You are not here, but you're my wind
Even when I can't see you, I feel the effects of you

  - Thank You for Your Smile, You Make It All Worth While To Me -      I Love You  

All the plastic people who live without a care.Try to sit around my table and never bring a chair...

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never_a_princess
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1 posted 2001-10-17 08:50 PM


*AwwZ* That's such a sweet poem, Ewok. It flows really nicely, too. "I Love you when I don't show it, I never think you will know it, You are not here, but you're my wind
Even when I can't see you, I feel the effects of you." I love that stanza! You wrote it very WELL(not good) :P Rockin' nice poem, buddy!
__o0o_Anna_o0o__   *waves*

Friends are angels who lift us to our feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly.

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2 posted 2001-10-17 10:08 PM


wonderful tribute...i hope you gave this to her...such a sweet poem

"I Love you when I don't show it
I never think you will know it
You are not here, but you're my wind
Even when I can't see you, I feel the effects of you"

*sighs* true how some can make you feel that way...and nice ending lines...enjoyed.

=)

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3 posted 2001-10-18 01:41 PM


What a sweet tribute!!!

I really hope that you've given this to her and if you havent for some unknown reason  you better do it soon!!

Great job   So sweet!!!!!!!!!!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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