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Angel Bee
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0 posted 2001-10-16 09:58 PM


Nobody loves you the way I do

I love the way you talk and all your flaws
I love the attention your smile draws

You are my shoulder to cry on
You take gray clouds away, you are my sun

Everything you do amazes me
With you I am as happy as I can be

As long as you are here I will love you
Nobody can love you the way that I do


This is my first in a while, I'm glad to be back with pip! Tell me what ya think, I know its not that good, its been a while. later ab

*~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~*

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Poetof-the-night
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1 posted 2001-10-16 10:06 PM


Good poem, has a special meaning to me.
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2 posted 2001-10-17 02:33 AM


where have you been? anyways...wB! i think the poem itself was very nice. great job on expressing your feelings in this poem.

=)

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3 posted 2001-10-17 04:02 AM


Great work Angel Bee nice to see you back  

Andrew

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4 posted 2001-10-17 04:32 PM


nice write.....good style

All the plastic people who live without a care.Try to sit around my table and never bring a chair...

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5 posted 2001-10-18 01:44 PM


Im not doubting ur love for him but i dont think anyone ever imagines someone else loving a certain person more than them...i just think its weird that people think that way and i wonder why we do..i even think it to so dont think im criticizing lolol...Good poem..you really expressed how you love ALL the aspects of him..sounds like a great guy  

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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6 posted 2001-10-18 06:49 PM


it reminds me of the old song 'they can't that away from me'.  i'm such a jazz junkie.  heh.

very enjoyable.

thanks for the read.

- jen

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

[This message has been edited by quietlydying (edited 10-18-2001).]

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