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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
Why can't I just let you go Why is it that Everytime you enter the room The feelings I try to shrug off return And start to engulf me and then I drown I drown in the idea Of you and me,us But that will never be We just don't feel the same I'm in love and your not At least not i love with me Why can't I get that through My thick head You love her And not me... I need to move on Try to love another But don't you see You haunt me in my dreams The very thought of you Send chills down my spine And a tear to my eye Can't you see? You make me cry I'm in love I've fallen in too deep To pull myself out again Once agian I tell myself I must move on Live my life As if you never entered it Live my life and go on without you.... Sry guyz that I haven't been around in awhile but high school just started! I've been really busy! Well thanx for reading this! Luv ya allz! Bub bye oh yeah and my new fave quote...*If it's to sad to look behind, and your too scared to look ahead, look beside you and there I will be* *~*In 3 words I can sum up everything about my life, It goes on*~* *~*Of all the words of tounge or pen,the saddest are those...it might have been*~* [This message has been edited by sweetypie5 (edited 10-16-2001).] |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
I liked this. I know how you feel, well, I've known how you feel. Believe me you'll find someone. Keep writing. ab  *~We are all pencils in the hands of God --Mother Teresa~* |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
I really liked this poem.....i know the feeling described despite the fact that it is from the other perspective.....keep on writing If I could be anything in the world, I would want to be your tear. I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheek, and die on your lips. -Ender |
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Alexia
since 2001-06-07
Posts 164Sweet And Sassy |
i loved yer poem, it was really good. keep up the good writing! Alexia I was here, but now im not, I went some where to smoke some *tôp*, I left this here to prove a point, life is hell without a *tniôj* |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
Why can't I get that through My thick head You love her And not me... this is a sad one- i know it would be tough to let sumone go, and then see them with someone else. i hope things get better for you and good luck with school and all that..  thanks for sharing!see the glass crack like a flower opening |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Ugh...those darn tingly feelings we get inside when we like someone...i dont think we can ever control em hun so dont even bother!! LoL...This was a really cute poem, brings back a lot of memories of crushes and butterflies in my tummy... ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
It's always sad when you love someone and they move on. You should try to also because if you keep dwelling you're never going to truly live. Take care and thanks for the read. ~AF~ Maybe I'm just a girl...interupted. |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Hey, This was awesome and it is exactly how I feel about this one guy.. but I'm gunna have to move on.... thanks for the read very good!! I wish ya luck! Always, Amanda If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Wow... Dang, all too true, I know EXACTLY how you feel. Have been going through this for the last year and a half... It's hard, but eventually you'll move on. Good job! - Cody - |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hey, I remember you  you're Priscilla's friend what happened to you and her? I'm glad to see you decided to come around again I do hope that you'll stay though I agree with what you said in your poem you have to act on what you already realize hope things do get better though thanks for sharing again là où est mon amour? |
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never_a_princess Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 82Show Me the Money |
Heyy..Great poem! *can relate to many parts of this..well, some* And yes, the struggle to move on is hard, but the reward of finding someone else is perfect for you is well worth the struggle. Keep postin!__o0o_Anna_o0o__ *waves* Friends r angels who lift u 2 ur feet when ur wings have trouble remembering how 2 fly. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Great poem I know how you feel.I like this poem keep up the great work. Lauren |
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