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At last (short) |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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What once was dead, Revived with your sweet breath. A heart too young to be so closed, Opening to your arms. Your laughter; a gentle breeze. New hope does now ignite. "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
A wonderful poem Jenn, I hope that you are happy now  Andrew "Ph33r Me I eat N00bies Ph0R bReakFAsT" |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i REALLY liked this piece...since first of all, its about ME  ...wOoHOo!!! *coughs*..j/k HeHe. i think the wording with the imagery was awesome.[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 10-16-2001).] |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Hura! Jenn- Hope things stay happy... Short, sweet...and wonderfully done. Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth... |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I loved it... short, honest, beautiful, and totally expressive of your feelings. What more could you want? There are always answers as long as you're open enough to accept the answers you were not looking for. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Awww, you guys are so good to me. *hugs* thanks"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
glad to see things are getting better là où est mon amour? |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you Acire. "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you're welcome  là où est mon amour? |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
SHort and sweet Nicely done jenn!!!ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*dances to Godsmack's song "Greed"* Hey nice poem. Short, but nice nonetheless. You seem happy and I hope it stays that way  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Dopey-Dope...nice song choice! *MOTIONS HE WANTS TO JOIN IN DANCE* On to you, Jenn... Short, but sweet. Whoever said that, well said! I liked it. Sometimes short poems are quite powerful. I too hope things are well with you. Sincerely, Titus 8-) "Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
short but sweet...yea just like its owner right? good poem jenn....liked it bunches! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
LOL you guys are a riot. Thank you!!  "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 11-01-2001).] |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
Hazzah! That was quite good Just because it is short does not mean that you are not cappable of expressing what you want- this poem displays that -Dreys |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great poem. to many other things to be written on here. just catching up on your poem cause i love the work hope that you don't mind. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hello Jeremiah. Well thanks for the reply and comments. Glad to see ya around. Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Hmmm....very interesting Jenndaline. I'm going to talk to you about this one and find out the news! lol. Take care and thanks for the read. ~AF~ Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow... an ambiguous one. This piece could mean so many things. I really enjoyed this, and am going to read over it a few more times to figure it out completely, heh I really like the power. You have a lot packed in to a short piece, but not too much. It's a comfortable medium of the two. Very nice work, once again. Enjoyed, as always! --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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