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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz 
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So leave me here amidst the other 'do-it-yourself, save-the-world' psychological rejects. The dill from a pickle overdose burning my throat. Getting smaller everyday I wonder how long it will take you to realise that I was never really ok.
so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow.. *speechless* .... Bel |
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Knight of Secrecy Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 113San Juan, Puerto Rico |
truly a great poem. -CM. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
*Coughs in shock* Excellent! Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth... |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
That... I think... is one of my favorite poems ever. I just really relate to it and you wrote it so, so well. I don't even really know what to say besides that I love it. There are always answers as long as you're open enough to accept the answers you were not looking for. jaimespoetry.blogspot.com [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 10-20-2001).] |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Hhmmm... it can't be THAT easy for me to understand... but maybe it can... Awesome write, as usual, and I actually GOT this one for once  !If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I think we need to talk again  là où est mon amour? |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
"I wonder how long it will take you to realise that I was never really ok." That part reminds me a lot of me and the people in my life...i thought it was the strongest part of the poem...thats my opinion tho Great job!!!ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Oh wow, this was just wonderful. One of the best poems I've read in a long long time. I am truly amazed at this one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
nice job jen. “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
But honestly... are any of us "ok"? Were we ever...? Or was it a dream.... |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
my goodness... *dq **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This is really great. Someone already stole my Fave. Lines.  ~I wonder how long it will take you to realise that I was never really ok.~ I loved that part, it's so true. Nice one. Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
quietlydying, I'd like to hope we are all ok. But I know sometimes in joking around with my friends, I wonder if we are all ok. But seriously, I hope things get better for you. Dawn |
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