Poem about a love I never had

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yankey102002
New Member

since 2001-10-13

Posts 4
Alabama

0 posted 2001-10-14 10:35 PM

Can somebody tell me,
What I’m doing wrong.
I can’t seem to get you outta my head
Can’t seem to move on

People may think I’m crazy
For having feelings for someone like you
They don’t see the kind of person you really are
And all the amazing things that you do.

Chorus:
If only these feelings would pass by
Or maybe you could give “us” a try
There’s something about you
That just drives me crazy
What can I do to make you see
That I’m in love with you baby?

I keep having the same dream
Of you and me together
I just want to be with you
Now and forever

If only this dream would come true
We would passionately kiss all through the night
We would look deep into each other’s eyes
Speak soft words and hold each other tight.

Chorus:
If only these feelings would pass by
Or maybe you could give “us” a try
There’s something about you
That just drives me crazy
What can I do to make you see
That I’m in love with you baby?

I wish I could tell you how much I love you
Instead of having to keep it all inside
Someday I know I’ll eventually give in
And express to you what I have been having to hide

Chorus:
If only these feelings would pass by
Or maybe you could give “us” a try
There’s something about you
That just drives me crazy
What can I do to make you see
That I’m in love with you baby?

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-10-14 10:43 PM

Welcome!!!

This is SO romantic!! Enjoyed this first post from you. Can't wait for more!!

Please check your email for a special greeting!! ~SEA

NathanS
Member

since 2001-09-27

Posts 106
CA

2 posted 2001-10-14 11:26 PM

Wow!
A really excellent write! This one went to the library... interesting how a lot of peoples first posts are really good... shows a good trend

Can't wait to see other writes by you!

-Dreys

Honey
Member

since 2001-10-09

Posts 92
Hot girl From Canada

3 posted 2001-10-15 12:54 PM

I loved this, I actually have a "tune," for it in my head. I was partically singing it and it was beautiful. I would love to sing this song to someone. Great write and welkum to pip, You'll love it here

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

pharon
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

4 posted 2001-10-15 02:39 AM

wow...great job with this one! have faith, if it's meant to happen it will, and if it's not maybe one day you'll look back and "thank god for unanswered prayers"

me

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-10-15 11:21 AM

Welcome!!!!!!!!!!

This was a great first post, very romantic and heart felt

I enjoyed it a lot and i cant wait to read more from you

WELCOME AGAIN!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-10-15 07:30 PM

Nicely done here. I really enjoyed this and welcome you to passions.

~gretchenp34~
Junior Member

since 2001-10-08

Posts 46
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2001-10-16 06:09 PM

ahhhh thats so sweet!!!!!! i loved it!!! beautiful! beautiful! absolutely beautiful!!!

Love is like learning to play the piano. First you must learn to play by the rules, then you must forget the rules and play by your heart.

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

8 posted 2001-10-16 09:32 PM

Great Poem to introduce yourself with! Excellent write, I look forward to reading more in the future. Welcome to our family at Passions, Hope you enjoy it here! Keep writing!

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