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Zukene_Chic
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0 posted 2001-10-14 10:14 PM


I have a little box of crayons
I like the way each one smells
Sometimes, late at night, I'll use them
Just so I'll remember
That its all gonna be fine


I wrote this one at two in the morning, after I thought about my life. You all should try smelling a box of crayons sometime. Its more comforting than you would think.

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Knight of Secrecy
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1 posted 2001-10-14 10:28 PM


Short,to the point, and tells a whole story, very nice.


yankey102002
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2 posted 2001-10-14 10:37 PM


really made me think.... i like it.. keep it up!!!
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3 posted 2001-10-15 10:54 AM


hmmmm, very interesting read  



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4 posted 2001-10-15 11:23 AM


Ohh crayons..thank god for the creation of crayons! I dont like how they smell but i love all the pretty colors..i enjoyed this piece a lot   Great job and keep em comin!
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