Teen Poetry #5 |
six dollars a hit... |
quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
Chemical euphoria claims the sanity I once clung to with such pride. I don't deserve your pity. - jen so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This piece had a great flow to it, thank you for a most interesting read Andrew "Ph33r Me I eat N00bies Ph0R bReakFAsT" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very very very interesting i do hope you realize it's not worth it thanks for sharing keep em coming hi Sweets/puff puff/bubbles , Lizzy , Jesa , Ina , Allysa , Marie , Cherish , Jenn , Minna , Chelsea , Leah , Kimmie , Ashley , Smurfy , Alexia , Kamie , Kari , Nan , Sea , Javi , Zu , Lml , Albertia , Linc , Jesse , |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow, I don't know what to say. It makes perfect sense Bel |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Acire pretty much said everything I would have, but i'll tell you that the poem itself was wonderfully done. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Interesting i liked it a lot! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Guess what I'm doing?! Yup, going back and reading all your posts. Chemicals...mmm...they are always such beautiful things. They bring about the best in people and the worst. I do like what you've done with the idea. ~AF~ Anti Lemming Crusader - Fight against the conformity! |
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lilmissbabyteddybear Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 17Abilene, Texas |
I really liked your poem.It kind of spoke to me.. JeNnY |
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