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0 posted 2001-10-14 07:25 PM


Chemical euphoria
claims
the sanity
I once
clung to
with such pride.

I don't deserve
your pity.

- jen

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

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1 posted 2001-10-15 09:56 AM


This piece had a great flow to it, thank you for a most interesting read  

Andrew

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2 posted 2001-10-15 06:21 PM


very very very interesting
i do hope you realize it's not worth it
thanks for sharing
keep em coming



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3 posted 2001-10-15 09:42 PM


Wow, I don't know what to say.  It makes perfect sense
Bel

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4 posted 2001-10-17 12:23 PM


Acire pretty much said everything I would have, but i'll tell you that the poem itself was wonderfully done.  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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5 posted 2001-10-18 01:46 PM


Interesting   i liked it a lot!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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6 posted 2002-10-28 07:15 AM


Guess what I'm doing?! Yup, going back and reading all your posts.

Chemicals...mmm...they are always such beautiful things. They bring about the best in people and the worst. I do like what you've done with the idea.

~AF~

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7 posted 2003-03-16 11:55 PM


I really liked your poem.It kind of spoke to me.. JeNnY
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