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quietlydying
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0 posted 10-14-2001 07:25 PM       View Profile for quietlydying   Email quietlydying   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for quietlydying

Chemical euphoria
claims
the sanity
I once
clung to
with such pride.

I don't deserve
your pity.

- jen

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

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1 posted 10-15-2001 09:56 AM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

This piece had a great flow to it, thank you for a most interesting read  

Andrew

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2 posted 10-15-2001 06:21 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

very very very interesting
i do hope you realize it's not worth it
thanks for sharing
keep em coming



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3 posted 10-15-2001 09:42 PM       View Profile for Isabel Galaxia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Isabel Galaxia

Wow, I don't know what to say.  It makes perfect sense
Bel
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4 posted 10-17-2001 12:23 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Acire pretty much said everything I would have, but i'll tell you that the poem itself was wonderfully done.  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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Interesting   i liked it a lot!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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6 posted 10-28-2002 07:15 AM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

Guess what I'm doing?! Yup, going back and reading all your posts.

Chemicals...mmm...they are always such beautiful things. They bring about the best in people and the worst. I do like what you've done with the idea.

~AF~

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7 posted 03-16-2003 11:55 PM       View Profile for lilmissbabyteddybear   Email lilmissbabyteddybear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lilmissbabyteddybear

I really liked your poem.It kind of spoke to me.. JeNnY
 
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