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the wonderful land of oz

0 posted 2001-10-14 07:17 PM


Sitting here,
sucking all of

the

            chocolate

off
of the almonds in
my
ice cream,

is that
what I did
to you?

I spit them back in
the bowl.
No wonder
you left.

- jen

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

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1 posted 2001-10-14 10:19 PM


WOW! Maybe thats what all of us chicks do to our lovers. I've always wondered about that. Maybe all of our questions can be answered by comparing them to ice cream  
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2 posted 2001-10-15 10:56 AM


You got me thinking here
such an analogy of things
thanks for sharing



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3 posted 2001-10-15 11:22 AM


What an interesting analogy..never heard one quite like it b4...hmm..this really made me think..
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4 posted 2001-10-20 04:55 PM


HMmmmm

Quite interesting and thought provoking...
*Goes off into her corner to think*
Thanks..Much enjoyed
*Snags a copy of the poem for a more indepth look*

Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth...

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