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Teen Poetry #5

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CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-10-14 12:00 PM

Howdy. This is a brand new kind for me... I got bored one night, so I figured I'd try the style. I don't think it's very good, but you can let me know what ya think about it...

SAD CLOWN

Sophisticated
Amazing
Daredevil

Constant
Lonliness
Opened a
Wavering
New life

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2001-10-14 12:04 PM

Ohh... I get it now! Took me a minute... I like it, but it confused me a bit... Wait a sec... doesn't confuse me now... I get it!!! Great write!!!

If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-10-19 02:58 AM

Interesting on so many levels Codes. Nice job of doing an acrostic. You should try doing them more often.

~AF~

"I remember the days when I was so eager to satisfy you"
Nelly Furtado - On the radio

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-10-19 08:34 AM

clowns scare me

Nice change in your writing...good job on the poem!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

4 posted 2001-10-19 09:40 AM

Personally I like it a lot and I think that you did it very well. It's always nice to try something new.

There are always answers as long as you're open enough to accept the answers you were not looking for.

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