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CwboyAtHeart
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0 posted 2001-10-13 11:55 PM


Hey!  I'm finally posting another poem.  It's been like over a month...  Anywho, this one is about the terrorist attacks and everything going on now/lately.  Let me know what ya think!  

GOD'S WONDERFUL GRACE

By God's wonderful grace
I know everything will be alright
Peace will be found in the world
There will be no reason to fight

With God's great love
I know we will be okay
Our hearts will be healed
And we will forgive someday

With God's awesome power
The world will join forces
To care for the hurting
And bring forth his justice

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

© Copyright 2001 C.K.N. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-13 11:57 PM


I like this one, and it is so true! I just hope that the rest of the world can figure it out!

If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

fractal007
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2 posted 2001-10-14 03:14 AM


Impressive work.  It's almost a challenge to me and to all.  Perhaps some meter would do here.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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3 posted 2001-10-14 11:25 AM


Beautiful penned. We must behold our faith and you describe "God's wonderful love"  very well!
Thank you for sharing

Charisma

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~gretchenp34~
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4 posted 2001-10-14 12:46 PM


this is a very true poem....i like it very much. also-i like ur "note to self" bc it just made me think for a lil bit, thanks

Love is like learning to play the piano. First you must learn to play by the rules, then you must forget the rules and play by your heart.  

Lakewalker
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5 posted 2001-10-14 05:46 PM


I like the messege here and how it was delivered.  Good job on the poem Cody

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.

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