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0 posted 2001-10-13 11:51 PM


Creeping down the hallway...
To find out where you are.
Spying on you once again...
To make sure you didn't take the car.

Sitting at the computer...
Typing on the board.
Squinting to see what I'm actually typing...
I wonder if I'll get an award?

Lying in your bedroom...
Totally unaware.
Jumping up three or four feet...
Yelling, "That's not fair!"

I just scared you out of your wits...
And trust me, it was fun.
Just to see on your face that priceless look...
Before I started to run.
~I have no idea where this one came from! It's basicly about (nice spelling, eh?) my scaring my nephew every three hours by bursting into his room and yelling at the top of my lungs. It's so much fun!!!

If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

© Copyright 2001 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-14 04:13 PM


*LOL* enjoyed it very much  

Charisma

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2 posted 2001-10-14 05:51 PM


lol! thats so cute! i do that to my little cousin too....the look is so sweet and innocent i love lil kids!!!!!

Love is like learning to play the piano. First you must learn to play by the rules, then you must forget the rules and play by your heart.  

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3 posted 2001-10-14 05:54 PM


Good job on this, and little kids are so much fun

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.

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4 posted 2001-10-15 08:02 AM


LoLoL i never thought the inspiration behind this piece would be scaring ur nephew!! Interesting piece...thank  god for kids eh?
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5 posted 2001-10-19 03:32 AM


Kids are horrid but good to see they give you something to write about.  

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"I remember the days when I was so eager to satisfy you"
Nelly Furtado - On the radio

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