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Mykels_Angel
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since 2001-06-25
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0 posted 2001-10-13 05:11 AM


lonely boy,
why are you sitting over there all alone
cant you see
the sky is crying for you,
lonely boy,
open up your eyes and see
see, the world is crying for you

lonely girl,
my heart is weeping
lonely girl,
my heart is singing.
lonely girl,
my heart is bleeding
lonely girl, look at this lonely boy

i reach down with all my heart and strengh,
and take  your little hand in mine,
and give you all my love.

Time should never ever be so dull,
please little boy, little girl,
smile.

The clouds are asleep
in the dark dark sky.
But the angels
can still be seen.
they are up there
they are scared and alone.

You dont want to be an angel.

i reach down with all my heart and strengh,
and take  your little hand in mine,
and give you all my love.

Time should never ever be so dull,
please little boy, little girl,
smile.

The clouds start to open up
a stream of light shines down
dear child, look into the light
cant you see your destiny?
cant you hear the voices calling you?

Maybe you don't want to.

© Copyright 2001 Sarah Alford - All Rights Reserved
anonymousfemale
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1 posted 2001-10-13 12:38 PM


Ooo this is so great, Sarah!  
Is this one of the songs for your band because if it is, wow. It'd sound great sung. You know you're going to have to give me some dates so I can get down there and see you play.  

Thanks for posting this. I enjoyed it. Great content.  

~AF~

"I remember the days when I was so eager to satisfy you"
Nelly Furtado - On the radio

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2 posted 2001-10-13 06:13 PM


very nice piece!
sounded like a song to me...

"If I made you mad today, would you still love me tomorrow?"-Incubus

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3 posted 2001-10-13 11:55 PM


I love it! That would be an AWESOME song!!!

If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

Mykels_Angel
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4 posted 2001-10-15 05:48 AM


YAY I KNOW IT RULEZ!

and AF.... ASAP!

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