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Teen Poetry #5

insane

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

0 posted 2001-10-11 02:00 AM

[insane]

so go ahead an psychoanalyze
my CHAaotic [PSYCHotic?] dreams
about the one I love
[i'll never tell, WHO]
and then

declare me. i dare you.

- jen

so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2001-10-11 10:10 AM

Whoa...this was extremely powerful! I'd love to challenge someone in the way u've done here in your poem..amazing job!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-10-20 12:58 PM

Wow!!! Very Powerful indeed, no doubts about it
your style is so different, but still amazing
*applauds*

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

3 posted 2001-10-21 12:17 PM

Yes Powerful indeed.
Congrats!!!!!!!!!

~I haven't memorized all of the cute things to say but I'm working on it~

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

4 posted 2001-10-21 12:24 PM

I love the way you write! It makes me think about what you're trying to say! It's so different!!!!!

If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

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