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0 posted 2001-10-11 01:57 AM


maybe i should start giving titles to my poetry.

just a thought.
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So night may come to all those who rest
in peaceful dreams, and where am I left,
to walk the line, take the charge.
Night shift's mine, need you need you.

Vivacious fully conscious nightmares,
living my own personal hell.
Swallowed me whole, cold to the touch,
this wasn’t s'pose to happen, help me help me.
- jen



so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

© Copyright 2001 jennifer elizabeth - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-11 11:49 AM


Hey this is a really kickass poem, very honest....i hope all is fine.


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2 posted 2001-10-11 01:38 PM


This was an awesome poem! nice job  
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3 posted 2001-10-11 10:39 PM


Great poem, great poem!!!

If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

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4 posted 2001-10-12 12:24 PM


Wonderful poem I love it!!!
  Lauren

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