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quietlydying
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0 posted 2001-10-11 01:24 AM


[untitled]

Drowning
in your
pseudo charismatic
annoying outlook,
I can’t help
but
want to
strangle you.

- jen

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

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1 posted 2001-10-11 01:31 AM


Ooo...I know how this is. It's people like this that drive us completely insane!!
Strong piece and thanks for sharing, Jen.  

~AF~

"I remember the days when I was so eager to satisfy you"
Nelly Furtado - On the radio

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2 posted 2001-10-11 01:40 PM


Hmm...very interesting yet i know how you feel..nice job! Keep em comin hun!
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3 posted 2001-10-20 01:00 AM


Someone seems to steal my words
I was gonna say the same thing, "very interesting"
keep em coming

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?


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4 posted 2001-10-20 04:42 AM


LOL, I liked this one.  I often find myself dealing with pet-peve personalities too.  I can relate to this poem.

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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