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~gretchenp34~
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0 posted 2001-10-10 04:10 PM



Hey everyone! Thanks alot for all the nice warm welcomes!! Here's my next poem for you all!!!
You turn your head
don't let the tears show,
there is something
you don't want me to know.
Am I the only one?
Or are there others?
Who else has been with you,
under the covers?
You said it was love
but now we are through-
and I know one thing,
I WONT be missing you.

okay and i want a signature....can someone please tell me where and how to get it.....thanks!

© Copyright 2001 Gretchen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-10 04:33 PM


Hey Gretchin, another great piece< ireally enjoyed the read  

For signature goto:- Members area/help, then to change profile, then submit identification then the rest is just simple  

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Isabel Galaxia
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2 posted 2001-10-10 09:52 PM


Wow!
That's harsh!
People suck....  
Great poem tho
Bel

NathanS
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3 posted 2001-10-10 10:04 PM


Good poem!
I'z like people...


        -Dreys
I wanna fly!

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4 posted 2001-10-10 11:05 PM


this ROCKS!!   very well said my dear  

"One of the hardest things in life is having words in your heart that you
can't utter". ~James Earl Jones

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5 posted 2001-10-10 11:49 PM


Oh that brought back memories. Awesome!!! Just awesome! Keep it up!

If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

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6 posted 2001-10-11 01:50 PM


I'd give anything to be as strong as you in this way...i still cant get over my bf cheating on me...i re-live that day over and over..your very strong and i admire u for that...good for u that u walked away..its his loss not urs!! Amazing job  
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