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You Lie, I Cry
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You Lie, I Cry |
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luckyducky_505 Member
since 2001-04-29
Posts 53Kentucky, USA |
You tell me I can tell you anything, But when I do, You Lie. You lie and you make me cry. You tell me forever we will be, But then you leave, You lie. You lie and you make me cry. I thought our friendship was important, Then you stab me in the back, You lie. You lie and you make me cry. I can't take this anymore, You lie nad you make me cry way too much. I say good-bye and you shout at me. You lie and you make me cry. Smile -- because you never know who's falling in love with it. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oh I felt every inch of the pain in this piece. I know how this is so I can relate to you quite a bit. It hurts a lot but do you know what? People that make us cry and lie to us aren't worth our time. Remember your happiness in all of this. Be strong and take care. Thanks for sharing. Keep 'em coming.  ~AF~ "I remember the days when I was so eager to satisfy you" |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Yeah, I know a girl who went through that, and it tore her apart for a while. She was very upset over that, the guy was her Boyfriend. But time heals all wounds, as it did with me as well, and she found someone who will try his best to love her as she diserves to be loved, Me. I hope I can do all I've said. Whoops! Went off on a tangent! Sorry. The Poem was very good, and I can sympathize. |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
I really enjoyed this very much, a lot of poems I read on here are about people who have loved and lost, I enjoy this because people have the guts to share their feelings with everyone eles. Keep smiling |
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ShortSexyAngel777 New Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 9Louisiana, USA |
wow, i totally related with that. it wasnt a boyfriend or anything though it was with my father. he says that he wants to keep a friendship, and he loves me, and crap like that, then when i do open up he yells and leaves for all night every month or so, i never know when its gonna happen. but, good peom, keep up the good work! Maryn AKA Joshes Baby Girl |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
One day, you will wake up and say, "hey. I don't need him/her. I don't need his/her friendship." And that day, a stronger, wiser you will have been born. Great write! Heartbreak sucks, and there's no true remedy for it except giving it time and letting it work its way out of your system. If you ever need someone to listen, my email is spacebear_15@hotmail.com I know where you're coming from. Good luck! If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is definately a hard situation..u wanna believe that NEXT TIME it'll be different and NEXT TIME they'll stay w/me...and believe me...and listen to me...and so on...but Nothing changes if nothing changes...if i learned n e thing in life i learned just that |
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luckyducky_505 Member
since 2001-04-29
Posts 53Kentucky, USA |
Thanks everyone for everything. He will sooner or later love me though, i know he will. I just got to stick this out, he will relize this and will love me like i do him. I was watching Dawson's Creek last night and Joey let go of Dawson by telling him she was letting go and then he came to her and said nothing, just hugged her. That's what's gonna happen to me, i deserve this, i've went throught everything for him!! Smile -- because you never know who's falling in love with it. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
U do deserve what u want and im glad you see that! Its hard to look at the optomistic side of things...good job hun If ya ever need to talk please e-mail me at xitalysbabyx@aol.com |
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