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HeAvEnS AnGeL
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since 2001-05-17
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The Hot Girl From Canada

0 posted 2001-10-09 12:05 PM



I lay in bed at night,
This is tearing me apart.
I really like you both,
Is that wrong of my heart?

You are both so great,
You both make me laugh.
And if I told my friends,
All they would do is gasp.

I'm alone on this decision,
No one can help me out.
I really want to know,
What this is all about.

So what can I do,
I can't have you both.
But It's so hard to choose,
Who I like the most.

I guess it will take time,
But soon I will see.
What I really want,
And who's the best for me.


Whatever tomorrow brings I'll be there, with open arms, and open eyes ~Incubus~

© Copyright 2001 Ashley - All Rights Reserved
NathanS
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since 2001-09-27
Posts 106
CA
1 posted 2001-10-09 12:26 PM


Nice poem  
Good luck with your decision.

          -Dreys

knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 791
obscured vision
2 posted 2001-10-09 01:29 AM


i liked this alot. i can relate because im going through the same thing at the moment. best of luck with whatever you choose hun. *hugs*
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
3 posted 2001-10-09 01:56 AM


Yes you will have to choose what it best for you. You could have them both but they might get a bit upset. LOL  
I hope things work out for you. Thanks for posting this. I couldn't get through to your email address for some reason but your other post has been deleted for a double, alright?

Thanks for sharing.  

~AF~

I look at myself in the mirror; am I vital today?
Nelly Furtado - Hey Man

Acies
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Twilight Zone
4 posted 2001-10-09 01:10 PM


Just take things a little slow, and do a little "going out/seeing".
I hope you do see who's right for you
Nice to see you sharing poems again
Hope your back for good

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katherine
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since 2000-06-10
Posts 365
Canberra Australia
5 posted 2001-10-10 03:31 AM


this is really good. It's a hard thing to do but take your mind off it for a bit and the one whos right for you will come to you. You'll be thinking about mountain goats or something and then you'll be like thats it it's him. well good luck with it.

"by takeing no risks you are really risking everything"
Vic's RE book

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
6 posted 2001-10-10 03:35 AM


it is a little toughie huh? falling for two guys and not knowing what to do. i hope you get the right guy.. thanks for sharing..

The day I stopped loving I died.


       

Delirious_Smurf
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since 2001-08-08
Posts 90
Nothingness,P.R.
7 posted 2001-10-10 05:34 PM


Lovely poem. I cna relate to it 100% right now..*sighs* I hear ya  

I'm a professional happy puppet.

AngelPoet87
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 280
Indy
8 posted 2001-10-10 05:52 PM


*falls over* I'm in this exact situation right now.. its.. heart wrenching really. But... the answers will come, and whatevers meant to be.. will be. Or at least thats what I'm relying on at this moment. *sighs* Glad I'm not the only one, but I wish no one had to experience it...
Isabel Galaxia
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since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

9 posted 2001-10-10 09:01 PM


Wow! Geez...I don't know if it's better to love two or to love no one...
hmm..
This reminds me of some song...
Bel

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
10 posted 2001-10-11 02:05 PM


Wow what a sticky situation...this reminds me of one of my friends whose stuck between choosing like 5 different guys lol..boy does she have a lotta stories to tell me when i come to school in the morning lol..n e wayz i hope you decide what is right for me or should i so WHO is right for u..listen to ur heart  
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