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NathanS
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since 2001-09-27
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0 posted 2001-10-08 11:52 PM


Amazing subject, i know......
Well, i just kind of took the saying i made up (well, i haven't heard it anywhere else as of yet) and put it into a poem (I was kind of bored so i decided to) and this is what i came up with.

Poetry
is a window
Into the heart
The mind
And the soul

It is there
for others to
look into
and not
become dull


Like emotions
to your heart
And a book
to your mind

Poetry opens
the flood gates
of mankind


The saying was: Poetry is a window to the heart, mind, and soul.

       -Dreys
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

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anonymousfemale
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1 posted 2001-10-09 01:58 AM


OMG! Did you get that weeeeeeeeeeeeeeee off a web page because if you did....lmfao.

Poetry is all of these things and so much more! You've captured some of the wonderful things about it well.

Thanks for sharing. Keep 'em coming.  

~AF~

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Nelly Furtado - Hey Man

pharon
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alabama
2 posted 2001-10-09 02:22 AM


pretty good summation of poetry...keep 'em coming...

             me

katherine
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3 posted 2001-10-09 03:02 AM


poetry is definately all those things and more well done.

"by takeing no risks you are really risking everything"
Vic's RE book

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4 posted 2001-10-09 10:21 AM


I really liked this..it held a lot of truth in your words..i enjoyed it a lot! Nice job!
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