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Teen Poetry #5

Something else..

NathanS
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since 2001-09-27

Posts 106
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0 posted 2001-10-07 04:15 PM

Well, i think i post here entirely to much.
I felt like writing and i came up with this- i think it could work as a song.. then again mebbe not. Doesn;t matter, was just writing and thought i'd share.

You say i can sing
but my voice is rough

You tell me i can dance
but i trip and scuff

You tell me i know
but i never show it

You tell me i can win
but i always blow it

You tell me i can love
but i don't seem to,
the only thing i want,
is to be with you.

-Nathan

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
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1 posted 2001-10-07 05:27 PM

Everybody say awwww.... lol this was really good, I really liked what I read, It flowed well and it wanted find out where it was going. You get extra points for cuteness

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Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2001-10-07 05:31 PM

and I tell you that I like what you wrote here!!

Charisma

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2001-10-07 07:11 PM

Aaawww... What?!? I was told to say "aawww!" I would have said it even if I wasn't told to! Awesome! Into my library! Woohoo! That is so sweet!

If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

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