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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
Well, i just kind of had an urge to write- so i wrote this, you don't need to respond. Interpretation, what is there to see When i gaze into your eyes I observe all the hope that you have in me When i gaze into your eyes I see your heart of which i wish not to part When i gaze into your eyes there is some suprise by the actions you disguise When i gaze into your eyes a wonderous life is what i see A life with you and me When i gaze into your eyes All my fears are broken due to the words you've spoken -Nathan |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hmmm well I had the urge to respond...so there!  Anyway, I really liked this. Great job.  Jenn "You've got to get yourself together, you got stuck in a moment, and you can't get out of it." |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i think the poem itself was nice...enjoyed it lots! If you dont reply to OTHER peoples poems,are targets(peoplewillburnyourhouseinfuriousrage)*ahem*we dont want to put that title on our foreheads,do we? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 10-07-2001).] |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Responded....  It is a nice piece. Hope you're happy. ~AF~ I look at myself in the mirror; am I vital today? |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I'd like to inform you I haven't responded to this poem. . . . . . . . . . . . . . Oh Yeah I mean... Great work I really enjoyed the read and I hope to see more of your work around here "Ph33r Me I eat N00bies Ph0R bReakFAsT" - Replying might be your only hope - [This message has been edited by Marshalzu (edited 10-07-2001).] |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
Hehe, thanks for the replies. But i wasn't trying to use reverse psychology or anything... i really didn't want anyone to respond =P Thanks for the responds though |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
OOOO....this is a nice little one- i know what youre working on here- i get the feeling to write what whatever comes into my head too...and this one sounds nice ( though sad ) enough. ive responded...you cant stop me! MUAHAHHAA  wouldnt it be wonderful if children werent scared of looking up at the sky? |
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