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jaded
Junior Member

since 2001-07-24

Posts 20

0 posted 2001-10-06 04:14 AM

Loving You

Written from memory,
From the depth of the heart,
This life that I'm living,
Its torn me apart

Can't live with you,
Can't live without,
You left me before,
So why do i doubt?

I trust you, know you,
Feel you, want you,
Want to show you -
Just how much you mean to me

Use me, Amuse you,
Upset and confused,
Never want to lose you,

Loving you will kill me

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-10-06 12:48 PM

love shouldn't hurt bad, it should only hurt good

I liked this one

well done

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2001-10-06 08:39 PM

Aaawww... that's so sad and so well-written. Like SEA said, love shouldn't hurt bad... if you need a listening ear, I'm at:
spacebear_15@hotmail.com

Maybe in order to understand mankind, we have to look at the word itself: "Mankind". Basically, it's made up of two separate words - "mank" and "ind".

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

3 posted 2001-10-06 08:46 PM

I agree as well, love should NEVER hurt bad, but sometimes it does, I've been there. If u ever ned to talk, here I am at Lazzzybum2K1@aol.com.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-10-07 05:39 AM

Love. What a pain. In the end it ends up causing you more heart ache than a burrito.
Remember to stay strong though. When things hit a certain point, they have to go up.

Don't forget to reply too.

~AF~

I look at myself in the mirror; am I vital today?
Nelly Furtado - Hey Man

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2001-10-07 08:31 AM

Love...grrr.... I dunno about love. I do know that it exists. And when you feel it, it's beautiful. It's also nice if it lasts

But everyone is right...love shouldn't hurt you... you should feel more complete, happier...etc. Everyone else hurts us in life; the love we have should serve to heal.

Nice work
Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

jaded
Junior Member

since 2001-07-24

Posts 20

6 posted 2001-10-07 08:31 AM

thanks guys, your great

fortunately, im not having love troubles at the moment, well not anything like in that poem.

i just put myself in that position to see what it must feel like, i hope you enjoyed reading it

thanks for reading and replying

if dreams had wings I'd fly to you

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

7 posted 2001-10-07 01:58 PM

This was a great piece of work, it good to see you can empathise and put yourself in other peoples shoes.

Zu

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