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pharon
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since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

0 posted 2001-10-05 12:23 PM

           make
           only
               who
              we
              know
           speak
           about
           after
              almost
            always
                   never
              love

                   me

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-10-05 09:51 AM

I don't understand this one, maybe you could shed some light on it for me?? It sounds really cool, I just don't know what you mean here.

pharon
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since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

2 posted 2001-10-06 05:38 PM

to be perfectly honest, it's hard to describe this one...

me

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-10-06 11:43 PM

The feeling I am getting from this is you are writing about the feelings of love (obviously) however because of a situation, you wrote the piece in a tricky fashion because that is exactly what love is to you.
OK probably way off base on that one but it's what it read like.

Thanks for the read.

~AF~

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anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-10-07 02:24 AM

hmmm...interesting, enjoyed this piece as always

If you dont reply to OTHER peoples poems,are targets(peoplewillburnyourhouseinfuriousrage)*ahem*we dont want to put that title on our foreheads,do we?

pharon
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since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

5 posted 2001-10-07 03:44 AM

AF...actually you weren't off base at all...you just put into words what i couldn't ...thanx...and thanx to the rest of you for your reply's.

me

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

6 posted 2001-10-08 12:04 PM

you know i think you ar the only person i know who can put a few words together in a string and somehow make it cohere!...its a nice little read i loved the way the words flowed ( alomost on top of one another ) with :about,after,almost & always and then sorta halted with "never". and i had the same feeling Af had about love being a confusing thing where you and it are concerned. i think you did it pretty well. good job on the poem thanks for sharing

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-10-17 12:14 PM

Weirdo hehe.....but I really liked this one. it even confused me a bit, but I got it....obviously about love and Liz's little explanation helped a bit....I think you portray raw emotion very well.....cryptic at times, yet meaningful. Well done.

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

8 posted 2001-10-18 10:15 AM

I like poems like this but i dont understand it so much...then again im like half asleep lol

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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