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Forever's Over ( Yay! I can post again!)

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HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 08-17-2001
Posts 515
LI, New York


0 posted 10-03-2001 09:57 PM       View Profile for HopelessRomanticGuy   Email HopelessRomanticGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for HopelessRomanticGuy

I'm back!  Sorry about not posting or replying for a while, but my computer woulden't log in to the site for some reason.  What can I say, it's junk.  I'll try to be more active again.  Well, hope you like my poem, it's a little different from my other work, isn't it?  Hope you like it!
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I thought that I would wait forever,
that I would get over you never.
But time goes on,
LIFE goes on.

I thought that you were my destiny,
that your love would complete the rest of me.
But people grow and find love in odd places,
in people close they find hidden feelings in their faces.

For a long time I thought you loved me,
that it was more than just a fantasy.
More it may very well be,
but now your love is no longer received in me.

My heart has moved on to the future,
leaving dreams of us in the past.
She came to me, broken and wounded,
I found I loved her and thus concluded,

That I was finally over you,
I hope now you are over me too.
If we will wind up together who knows,
but I'm not waiting, I go where the wind blows.

I wish you luck with Rudy, that's him,
'cause I can't love you again at a whim.
And if you remind me I said I'd wait forever,
I'll say my heart couldn't survive being loved never.

And if you say that's not forever, it's limited days,
i will only have one thing to you to say:

Forever's over.
© Copyright 2001 Richard H. Dikeman - All Rights Reserved
NathanS
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since 09-27-2001
Posts 115
CA


1 posted 10-03-2001 10:50 PM       View Profile for NathanS   Email NathanS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NathanS

Very nice poem  
I like it very much because i have had similar emotions somewhat recently.

Well written, adding to library  

             -Nathan
AngelPoet87
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since 04-21-2001
Posts 418
Indy


2 posted 10-03-2001 11:04 PM       View Profile for AngelPoet87   Email AngelPoet87   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AngelPoet87

Ouch, been there, done this, been the victim.
SunShine913
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since 08-19-2001
Posts 353
Italy but from NC


3 posted 10-03-2001 11:08 PM       View Profile for SunShine913   Email SunShine913   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SunShine913's Home Page   View IP for SunShine913

YAH!!1 you can post again.. of course once again i love your work..but i can say is OUch, been thier .. and well you should know that im here for you either way you go!!

                    !~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*
*If you ever need anyone to talk to feel free to l

aaron woodside
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since 09-26-2001
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4 posted 10-04-2001 12:25 AM       View Profile for aaron woodside   Email aaron woodside   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aaron woodside

WHOA!!!!

"Forever's Over"

HaHa loved it.  I wish I could say that to someone...

Perfect.  Keep it up.

Ex Animo,
    Aaron
Angelwings
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since 08-27-99
Posts 229
IL, USA


5 posted 10-06-2001 12:46 AM       View Profile for Angelwings   Email Angelwings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angelwings

Hope~
   This is great.  You once wrote in a reply to a poem of mine, "I've been there before"  and well I thought I'd share with you.  I've been here.  Actually I'm here lol.  Forever's hard to let go of.  But I'm so happy that you now can let forever go.  congrats and great poem.  It's definately goin in the library!
                Chelsea

If we're told we're bad, that's the only idea we'll ever have. Maybe if we are surrounded by beauty someday we will become what we see.

HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 08-17-2001
Posts 515
LI, New York


6 posted 10-06-2001 08:43 PM       View Profile for HopelessRomanticGuy   Email HopelessRomanticGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HopelessRomanticGuy

Yea, I'm finnaly over the previous topic of all my other poems.  I don't know why you are upset though, I'm GLAD I'm over her, I couldn't have lived like that much longer.  I'm glad you all liked it anyway, and am sorry that you must have gone thru what I've gone thru.  But I guess we all go thru it.  I'll try and be on to reply more often.
anonymousfemale
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since 02-02-2000
Posts 6304
Limbo


7 posted 10-07-2001 05:41 AM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

YES! Forever is OVER!! Woohoo for you!  
I'm so happy for you. You've found yourself able to move on which is nothing but a good thing. This piece highlights that moment really well.
Keep writing and keep posting.  

~AF~

I look at myself in the mirror; am I vital today?
Nelly Furtado - Hey Man

cherish
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since 03-25-2001
Posts 6045
swimming in fairy floss.......


8 posted 10-08-2001 12:26 AM       View Profile for cherish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherish

wow...im glad you're getting on with your life there rich, i know a friend who's finding it hard to let go of his ex....and i think this poem might just help him see that things are final when a couple do decide to break up and start seeing other ppl. very well done on the poem there rich, thanks for sharing  
@ your pic..hello there!

wouldnt it be wonderful if children werent scared of looking up at the sky?

       

samt
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since 08-02-2001
Posts 52
Brisbane


9 posted 10-24-2001 08:20 AM       View Profile for samt   Email samt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit samt's Home Page   View IP for samt

Thats cool, i now the feeling well, and that poem is so true. Love is everywhere huh !
WindSong
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since 12-23-2002
Posts 316
Long Island, New York


10 posted 01-09-2003 10:21 AM       View Profile for WindSong   Email WindSong   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WindSong

Haha..Classic memories of you "in love" with kerri, Gave me a good laugh...Nice write! great job lol bye

*Mistakes are made, you pay for them, then you do it again.*
~*~Love doesn't make the world go 'round, it just makes the ride worthwhile~*~

Victoria7
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since 01-28-2003
Posts 22


11 posted 01-28-2003 10:07 PM       View Profile for Victoria7   Email Victoria7   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria7

very well worded poem.... i think everyone can relate to this... i loved it
kirhar
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since 04-29-2003
Posts 13


12 posted 04-29-2003 09:09 PM       View Profile for kirhar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kirhar

i can relate to this poem now...lets just say OUCH!! but it was very well worded...i like it loads
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