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AllThatGlitters4321 Junior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 45 |
I wish you knew how much I feel for you. My words just can't express what im feeling now but, I just can't tell you and, im not sure why. We've became better friends over the year Being with you is so nice you make me laugh and keep away the tears. But im not sure if you feel the same... Do you ever wake up saying my name? Do you ever think about me when your out with your boys? When you look into my eyes do you think we can be. Cause i like you so much but i don't think you see This constantly flirting was all good at first but now it's getting old My head feels like it is about to burst... I can't take much more if you don't want me then what am i hanging around for So i will ask you now and this is where it is gonna end... Do you want me more than just a friend |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
 WELCOME AllThatGlitters4321! hey i really really loved this poem it was GREAT!!! im looking foward to reading more of your work! so you keep writing and i will keep reading!! thank you for the read OOOOO yeah and good luck!! !~Andrea~! |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
WOW! I have to agree with Andrea, this poem is GOOOOOOD! I LOVE it. In my library it goes! If seems to it a situation a 'special someone' of mine is in! I LOVED this poem. You have a style I like, but can't write good myself, so I'm a bit envyous. I hope to see more writing from you soon! |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
First -- WELCOME!!!  I totally agree with the first two replies, I LOVED THIS! it's wonderful. I was in the *exact* same place up until about 4 months ago.. now that great friend is the most amazing dearest person in the world to me (he already was, now it's just OK to say it, lol). I hope everything can turn out just a good for you  all ya gotta do is talk to him.. or give him this poem even.. GOOD LUCK!and I hope to read more from you, take care, Sarah *the chains which have held us are only the chains which we've made* |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
welcome to passions and all that jazz...good job on your first post...hit a little close to home, but that's a good thing! me |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
firs of all... WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really liked your first post...I cant wait to read more from you Its nice to have you join us Keep on postin!P.S.-Check ur e-mail for a special message! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good job on your first post. I did enjoy the poem and hope to see you post and reply in the future.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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AllThatGlitters4321 Junior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 45 |
I want to thank all of you so much for replying to my post thanks for all your comments...i will be sure to post much more |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Wonderful post. Keep it up. Later Ex Animo, Aaron |
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luckyducky_505 Member
since 2001-04-29
Posts 53Kentucky, USA |
Hey!! I loved this poem!~~! I relate to it well except for i know how he feels...i think!! I know it is fustrating but at least you aren't his best friend and he has a mean girlfriend!! LOL!!! Keep writting like this... you did great...I'm here for ya if ya need me!! Smile -- because you never know who's falling in love with it. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! Awesome poem, and I really hope things work out for you!! Keep writing! Rhonda Mr T trusts me with coaching the Jr. Girls rugby team. What was he THINKING?!?!?! |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
OMG!!! I know exactly how you feel..this kinda thing is really hard to go throught with and right now I'm stuck right in the middle of it! It really isn't all that great..I spilled my feelings to the guy I like but I'm not 100% sure how he feels though!! Grrr..well anyways I think you should be straight forward and tell him how you feel..it might be for the better! Good luck I wish you the best of luck! *~Jess~* PS~ This was a great poem. Everything was well said and seems to be one of the best poems I've ever read! Hope to see more soon! ~*~How can we be friends if everytime I think of you I know that's all we'll ever be~*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
first of all WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! I'm glad to see you've decided to join us here in Passions for Poetry. I hope you enjoy this place as much as we all do. So, enjoy reading as well as sharing your own pieces. Your first poem shared is very impressive considering it's emotional content. I see a lot of heart poured into it. That's always a plus. Thanks for sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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samt Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 52Brisbane |
Wow, that was good, very good. I wish you luck. If you find love, grab hold with both hands, cause it wont last forever. |
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