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aaron woodside
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0 posted 2001-10-02 09:49 PM



I was so bored in my physic's class today I just ended up writing this out of my so called "Notes".
Hope ya like.

The forces that pull us together
are really quite easily explained, you see
it's simple, it's science, it's natural
it's the Law of Universal Gravity.

it's not the way your eyes sparkle
even in the dull classroom light
and it's not your angelic smile
which makes my heart melt on sight.

it's not the way I speak your name
or how I casually glance at you
it's not the way I sound, smell, or look
that makes you want me like you do.

since all of the above are out
the law of Universal Gravity
explains it all, beyond a doubt
why You and I, together are We.

A bit sarcastic maybe, but...

Ex Animo,
    Aaron

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AngelPoet87
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1 posted 2001-10-03 08:08 PM


Aww this is pretty cute! Nice and sweet.  
~Ali

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pharon
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2 posted 2001-10-04 03:37 AM


sarcastic maybe, but well done..

            me

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I liked this   Nice job!
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