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anonymous albert ?
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0 posted 2001-10-02 12:40 PM




                                                                                                                                                        


                                                                                                                                                                    after curtains close;
                                                                                                                         "drowning in silver tears"
                                                                                                                                                                                  rusted mask...is, held.




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anonymousfemale
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1 posted 2001-10-02 01:16 PM




Well you actually wrote it. How very true though. *sigh* you know me too well.  

Thanks for this, sunshine.

~AF~

"Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination"

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2 posted 2001-10-02 06:34 PM


beautiful tribute
seems like she likes it
you're on base  

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie

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3 posted 2001-10-05 10:03 AM


Hehe this is really good Albertia well done on capturing Lizzys spirit  

"Ph33r Me I eat N00bies Ph0R bReakFAsT"

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4 posted 2001-10-08 12:57 PM


oh wow...there's a part of me which doesnt want to say exactly how much truth your words hold..but sadly it does....dang lizzy- i sentence you to eternity in Happy land!!

beautiful words as always alberta....you did very well with the format. its nice to see you posting again too! well done   bye alberta?

wouldnt it be wonderful if children werent scared of looking up at the sky?

       

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5 posted 2001-10-08 01:00 AM


Awwww, so nice to write for Lizzy.  
And yes, I too banish you to happy land. Go there and be merry!  

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

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6 posted 2001-10-08 03:09 AM


Bite me.  

LOL  

I look at myself in the mirror; am I vital today?
Nelly Furtado - Hey Man

cherish
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7 posted 2001-10-08 07:14 AM


*drags lizzy kicking and screaming into a land full od primary colours and flowers*...horrible i know but youre banished remember?...
'naff from me now.
good job alberta!

I love I live.


       

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8 posted 2001-10-09 02:44 AM


this is sweet. very nicely done
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9 posted 2001-10-09 02:54 AM


confusing at first...but good...(confusing one's are the best...simple reads are evil) hehe

              me

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