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0 posted 2001-10-01 07:03 AM


if i told you i was in love with you
would you tell me i was crazy?

if i told you i was in love with you
would you love me back?

if i told you i was in love with you
what would you do?

if you told me you were in love with me
i wouldn't say you are crazy

if you told me you were in love with me
i would love you back

if we were in love
would we get married?

if we were in love
would we get our own place?

if we were to fall in love
what would happen?


no officer i wasn't the one that ran up to acire and javi and kissed them than ran away it was that girl *points at lizzy*

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1 posted 2001-10-01 08:57 AM


Hmm...i wonder what would happen...what do you think?
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2 posted 2001-10-01 04:13 PM


Awwwww-- life's many questions! You did well here... nice work.  

Jenn

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3 posted 2001-10-02 02:07 AM


*does a happy dance*

this poem is for that someone that yall love but they don't love you that way.
robin

no officer i wasn't the one that ran up to acire and javi and kissed them than ran away it was that girl *points at lizzy*

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4 posted 2001-10-02 05:47 PM


understandable but hmmm so tell them that if you already haven't and then go from there dont just wonder whethere or not if they love you...

we fall like the stars then rise like the sun..Repentence.Forgiveness.We are blame worthy hold us to our wrongs..but don't hold our wrongs against us

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5 posted 2001-10-02 10:09 PM


ok jimmy i will. but i think i already have if ya get my drift....
robin

no officer i wasn't the one that ran up to acire and javi and kissed them than ran away it was that girl *points at lizzy*

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6 posted 2001-10-13 12:13 PM


Just some of the questions that run around our heads.  Hope things work out.  
Thanks for sharing



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7 posted 2001-10-17 04:25 AM


really acire i would of never thought hahaha!

no officer i wasn't the one that ran up to acire and javi and kissed them than ran away it was that girl *points at lizzy*

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