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DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA

0 posted 2001-09-30 11:57 PM


The Day fades and Memories fade
As the world of dreams overtakes me
And I dream dreams
No man was made to dream

The Day fades and Memories fade
As I travel through the aether
Through a reality never meant
To be seen my a mortal

The Day fades and Memories fade
And I see great wonders built for the Gods
I walk through the Halls of Valhalla
I drink a Mead made for the Valkeries

The Night fades and Memories return
And I awake back into the world of Man
And I see laying peaceful next to me
A wonder greater than any of my dream, my love.

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.


© Copyright 2001 Samson C. Justice - All Rights Reserved
fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

1 posted 2001-10-01 03:17 AM


Another great poem!  I love the romantic and magical atmosphere these poems of yours contain.  You should write write write and write some more!  You are, in my humble opinion, a rising fantasy writer!

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

mistic
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since 2001-05-06
Posts 233
Idaho, U.S.A.
2 posted 2001-10-01 06:23 PM


I really liked this one sam and it's great. so what if you wrote it in five minutes? i loved it anyway...   am i really better than all that?

Life is an open book with many unwritten pages, write something that's meaningful to you there.

DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
3 posted 2001-10-01 07:36 PM


Heheh, actually, yeah, I love writing fantasy & sci-fi stories. And yes stephy, you're better than all of those things  

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.


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