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Secsyy lil angel
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Portland Oregon, USA

0 posted 2001-09-29 02:22 AM


You Have Her

I close my eyes,
I see your face.
I touch my lips,
But yours I taste.
I think of you,
And your embrace.
But then I remember,
You have her.

I sit in the park,
And want you beside me.
I hear a sweet song,
And wonder why that can't be.
I dream every night,
And you're all I see.
But then I remember,
You have her.

You kiss her lips,
I wish they were mine.
I sit and think,
Will it fade with time?
But I know,
That you and her are fine.
And that there will never be an us...
Because you have her.

~*Love exists only in the hearts of those who choose to acknowledge its existence...*~

*~To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.~*

© Copyright 2001 Kia - All Rights Reserved
Domzi
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since 2001-09-08
Posts 288
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1 posted 2001-09-29 09:01 AM


Beautifully written.

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

Jenn Cirrincione
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2 posted 2001-09-29 06:08 PM


I HATE this feeling.  
Nice write tho! Keep it up.

Jenn

"In the words of a broken heart, it's just emotion taking me over; you'll never see me fall apart, in the words of a broken heart."

anonymousfemale
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Limbo
3 posted 2001-09-30 01:45 PM


Oh boy, have you been riding around in my head? *eyes you*  
Such horrible feelings but accepting them makes us human. Keep strong and remember that he might break up with her.  

~AF~

"Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination"

Isabel Galaxia
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4 posted 2001-09-30 09:42 PM


Wow.  That sucks horribly.  I kind of know how this feels..but from the other perspective...kind of...but a bit abstract.  Anyway great poem, things'll get better
Bel

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5 posted 2001-10-01 01:14 AM


OMG I've been there, tyme and tyme again, its awful...but somewhere along the line, I got a bf that she wanted...*sigh* turned out, he wanted her too

"A friend's shoulder makes a
nice pillow when you're crying" ~Me
"If beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I guess love is too" ~Me

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6 posted 2001-10-01 10:58 AM


Ughhh i've definately been in this situation and the feeling SUX!!! I hate it so much...::hugs::
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