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crazymin83
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0 posted 2001-09-28 09:19 PM


Life has taught me so much
Don’t take it for granted
Because you never know what’s going to happen to you.

You don’t have to hate everyone
They might want to be you’re friend
Accept them into your group.

Friends make life better
When you’re down and they’ll talk to you
Stay by you side when you need them.

Life is different for others
But we are friendly and want to be your friend
Give us a chance.


Minna

Our teachers asked us to write what life has taught us, the seniors. I have a disability and I go to a different kind of school, but I don't let that get in my way because I'm normal inside. Outside shows that I use a wheelchair, I hope you like the poem if you want to email me it's on top or Instant Message me SmileyMmT83 I love to meet new people. I don't bite!  

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cutie2005
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1 posted 2001-09-28 10:35 PM


Hey there,
    This was wonderful! And it's awesome to see someday like yourself think that! Right now I'm a freshmen in school and like you, i treat everyone wit recspect even if i don't really like them all that well... But I'm nice to everyone cuz you have to give what you want in return.. rught?  Anways thanks for the share that was sweet!
    Always,
      Amanda

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!



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2 posted 2001-09-30 12:44 PM


Yes, life is very precious and we should treat it that way.  As the saying goes, "Live today as if it's you last."  Make the best out of you life, and I believe you are doing so.  Thanks for sharing Min  

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TopGunLauren
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3 posted 2001-09-30 02:43 AM


It's a shame everybody can't be treated the same but that's how life is.But anyway great poem I liked it.
  Lauren

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4 posted 2001-09-30 08:08 AM


Yes. Life's too short for rash judgements and grudges. I'm glad to hear you're doing well.   Nice write.

Jenn

"You've got to get yourself together, you got stuck in a moment, and you can't get out of it."

crazymin83
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5 posted 2001-09-30 09:36 AM


Thank you it made it in the year book  
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6 posted 2001-10-01 11:14 AM


I think this was an excellent poem and outlook...i enjoyed it  
Spice
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7 posted 2001-10-14 10:52 PM


Wonderful message!

Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth...

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8 posted 2001-10-18 09:41 PM


I'm glad that you wrote about the good things that life has taught you! And I think I will email you... Someone who can write like that, I want to know!

If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

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