»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #5
»
I wish
| Teen Poetry #5 |
|
I wish |
|
Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
|
I wish that I could fly away And not feel any pain I wish that I could take your hand And feel all of my gain I wish that I could stop these fights That constantly barrage me I wish that I could say "I love you" And not remember what was said. I wish that we could stop these words That make me feel so bad I wish that we could go back to the Love that we once had I wish that when others said, "That's such a nice family" They could see the real us underneath And understand why I'm so sad. |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
We all have family problems, but family is always gonna be family. I do hope that you and your family do correct your differences. Hope things do wrok out fine. Thanks for sharing and keep your head up. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
||
|
DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Very well written and expressed. I hope that things work out on the family front, 'tis never a happy thing when there is a schism there. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ |
||
|
fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Beautiful poetry here! Such a hearfelt portrayal of your life. Your final stanza is, frankly, quite well done. Great closing, and great use of meter. The sad thing about this poem is that there are many families that have admirers when in reality they should have a crowd of mourners following them... "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
||
|
xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I wish that i could do these things too but unfortunately memories and feelings get in the way of all of that...this was a very good poem, hope things get better for you hun ::hugs:: |
||
|
anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
It sounds like a street angel, house devil situation. I hope that things improve for you. Living this way isn't too good so I know how it is. Pretty front, smile for the cameras and go on about your life like nothing is wrong. *sigh* Thanks for the read. ~AF~ "Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination" |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
