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Teen Poetry #5

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SunShine913

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since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

0 posted 2001-09-27 08:40 AM

Take me on that tempest’s night,
when flowers fold beneath torrents,
to the secret place where you hide,
unfilled lonely spaces in your heart.

And softly I will come near,
gently touch you, enclose you,
melt into you like rays from a fire
on a sharp winter night.

Then you will find me deep within,
a tempered white river carrying dreams.
Love’s unrepressed residual
removed from silence, from Time.

Then you will know what I am,
always. I am your lived days,
your precious laughter and tears,
and their net worth- their everything.

I have come into the placid pool
reflecting your grace, a gentle smile.
Epiphanies, like stars in your eyes,
chart the blessed course of my life.

!~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*
*If you ever need anyone to talk to feel free to l

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2001-09-27 10:52 AM

Oh how beautiful. I really like this, Andrea. In particular, the last stanza. It's very nicely written with just the right level of emotion in it.

Wow..thanks for the read. I hope to see more from you soon.

~AF~

"Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination"

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-10-01 07:47 PM

OMG!!! This is perfect
Others are missing a lot if they don't read this
*standing ovation*
I'm very very very impressed

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie

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