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Raven Skye
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0 posted 2001-09-26 06:32 PM


This long awaited night,
looking for the presents,
all the colorful wrapping paper,
all my friends by my side.
Singing the birthday song
around the big chocolate cake.
That special age of sixteen,
means nothing anymore...
a long awaited night,
nothing left to adore...
my forgotten birthday.

*×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×*
Don't just trust yourself,
learn what parts of yourself to trust.

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1 posted 2001-09-27 12:59 PM


they forgot your 16th birthday?! Oh hon, that is awful! I'm so sorry. Hugs to you, and Happy Birthday........
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2 posted 2001-09-27 08:12 AM


my parents actually. they've been so busy with everything lately nobody has mentioned anything about me birthday. it's today and the treat it like it means nothing and it's just another day.     BUT LIFE GOES ON!!! woohoo!!

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3 posted 2001-09-27 10:00 AM


I bet they are planning something wonderful for you and are just acting cool.....let me know how it goes! Happy Birthday Sweetie!!! 16 is magical, enjoy.   Hugs to you  


HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!  

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4 posted 2001-09-27 10:04 AM


thanks so much!!! ::hugs::  

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5 posted 2001-09-27 11:26 AM


Yeah if they are acting that calm they must be planning something big for you! Happy birthday all the same *hugs*  
I hope it got better for you.  

~AF~

"Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination"

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6 posted 2001-09-28 12:47 PM


I hope you tell us how it went *SEA sits on pins and needles waiting*   I hope you had a great day  
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7 posted 2001-09-28 11:40 AM


Aww yay!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! Im shur they didnt forget..your their lil girl..actually ur not so lil anymore if you turned 16...well yay!!!!!!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!    
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8 posted 2001-09-28 05:26 PM


Happy birthday!!!!! What can I say? People suck, and that really hurts. Have an awesome year, it's going to be great for you!

Rhonda

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9 posted 2001-09-28 05:29 PM


well what happened?
did they surprise ya?
nice poem btw!

"I swear officer! It was PINK."

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10 posted 2001-09-28 05:32 PM


noppee... nothing... nothing at all... blah blah BUT HEYY I'm keeping my head up!!  

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11 posted 2001-09-28 07:56 PM


ouch.  well that sucks  

Bel

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12 posted 2001-09-28 08:13 PM


well we care and we would have thrown you a bash to beat all bashes!! Hugs sweetie, I'm really sorry.  
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13 posted 2001-10-11 09:27 AM


         

Happy 16th Birthday
we'll throw the party        

       


hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie

[This message has been edited by acire (edited 10-11-2001).]

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14 posted 2001-10-12 03:18 AM


i wish you sincerely HAPPY b-day...even though late...i would like to say it...hehe...but that sucks...i hope you HAD a wonderful day filled with smiles...sweet sixteen to you

=)

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15 posted 2001-10-20 01:27 PM


*Steals one of Acire's cakes*

Nice write...Hope you had a Happy Birthday!

Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth...

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