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Teen Poetry #5

My Special Night

Julian L. Chester
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since 2001-06-05

Posts 50

0 posted 2001-09-25 10:12 PM

I like the way u look at me when were in the sunlight.
The way your hair smells,
The way your eyes sparkle and change colors.
Can I have your eyes and u take mine?
I have an urge to pluck out your eyes and switch them with mine.
The way I get around you that make me want to have you.
Just so you and me can take a ride together and forever be together.
Your mind makes up everything I do to be proof that it’s worth having you.
So as we sit down and shine together,
While we look up at the stars at night and takes sips of our wine.
We can talk and feel the,
Emotion in each other minds.

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2001-09-27 01:16 PM

"I have an urge to pluck out your eyes and switch them with mine."
OK I laughed my head off at that because it's something my little bro would say. lol

it's different and that scores you points. Remember to reply.

~AF~

"Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination"

Julian L. Chester
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since 2001-06-05

Posts 50

2 posted 2001-09-27 05:26 PM

well thank you but how old are you. tbut my best and most favorite part is where we drink wine together.

FoxXena
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since 2001-06-13

Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

3 posted 2001-09-27 05:26 PM

Funny and romantic, a very good combo.

~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~
~*~I say it is the written word.~*~

Julian L. Chester
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 50

4 posted 2001-09-27 05:28 PM

thanx for that compliment. i appreciate it. i will like to read some of your poems also.

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