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XFalloutX
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0 posted 2001-09-22 08:03 PM


The Love I have is too strong
But the pain she has caused
Hurts to much
Now that she is gone
There is something missing now
I feel another pain now
I'm so confused
I don't know what to do
The pain is too much
But there's something missing
I feel emptiness inside
What to do
I'm so confused

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1 posted 2001-09-22 09:52 PM


you give it time and you write out your emotions....just as wonderfully as you did here.   big hugs to you  
XFalloutX
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2 posted 2001-09-22 10:42 PM


ota I'll do that  

[This message has been edited by XFalloutX (edited 09-22-2001).]

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3 posted 2001-09-23 01:27 AM


I agree with Jesa
time definitely helps, and we all know that
but writing about it is another way of letting things out
actually, it's a great way of doing it
so, keep it up and keep sharing

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma

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4 posted 2001-09-23 03:49 AM


Time doesn't always help people.  

It might in this case but not always. Anyway, it seems like you're going through a rough trot. I hope things work out for you a bit better soon.

Thanks for the read.  

~AF~

Kookaburra sits in the old gum tree, merry, merry king of the bush is he. Laugh! kookaburra LAGUH! Kookaburra how gay your life must be.

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5 posted 2001-09-23 08:34 AM


I understand and relate to this. I hope you feel better!!   Keep writing!

Jenn

"In the words of a broken heart, it's just emotion taking me over; you'll never see me fall apart, in the words of a broken heart."

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6 posted 2001-09-23 05:36 PM


*hug* Don't let evil people like her get you down, kidd---pat.  
Dibs on the hair pulling! *brings gardening gloves* lol!

++ Leah ++

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

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7 posted 2001-09-24 07:43 PM


love it
absoltlye lov eit

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8 posted 2001-09-24 09:34 PM


Great poem. I loved it.
Kinda sad...I can relate, I'm sorry to say  

I'm a professional happy puppet.

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