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crazymin83
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since 2001-09-16
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0 posted 2001-09-21 08:33 PM


I remember how you’d look at me with your brown eyes
Your tail would always wag and never stop
When I had food you would find your way to me

When you 1st came to me I was scared of you
Because you were big
But soon we were soon to become friends for life

We would go to the mall together
People would say you’re so cute!
Everyone loved you

We’d go online together
Dad would feed you pancakes you’d love them

In February of 2001 you had cancer
The vet took you toe off
You had a cast pretty soon you got better

I took you camping
Lucy you loved the ducks
And we would take you everywhere

Then when I went back to school
You looked at me like where are you going
I told you I’d be back

Three weeks later you got weaker
You couldn’t drink or eat
So mom brought you to the vet

She said you didn’t move
You didn’t want to come home
Soon you died of skin cancer

When the news broke to me
I didn’t know what to say
I couldn’t believe that you went up to heaven

Even though you were a dog
You were my best friend in the whole world
Now my room is so empty

No dog bed
No dog dishes
No dog looking at me

I will always miss you
No dog will ever replace you
Now you’re with dad in heaven or where ever you are

Minna
September 21, 2001

<i>I always thought that we would look back on our crying and laugh, but I never knew we would look back on our laughter and cry. J.F.K </i&g

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anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
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1 posted 2001-09-22 03:54 AM


Aww..this is really sad.  
If your dog was in pain, its gone to a much better place with your dad.

Nice write and keep strong.  

~AF~

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Acies
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2 posted 2001-09-23 01:10 AM


Minn,

Again, I'm sorry for you loss
I hope this doesn't dampen your spirits
be strong ok?  keep you head up
thanks for sharing

by the way, how many usernames you got already?  

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma

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