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A Crimson Story |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Against a sky of wood Nails rusted with the brush of time Against the lapping of the waves. Footprints Once scattered upon the sand Now lay silent and hidden From the eyes of stagnant graves. Spattered blood Upon the blades of grass Whispering against the drifting wind Against the bodies wrapped in silk. A sponge Soaked in wine Sweet to the tired spirit Like that of a mother's milk. Day and night Pass 3 times behind stone. All is quiet and still...watching As death and night begin to wane. One hand Wrapped around the world Holding tight with love As wings approach the open flame. ===== Just enjoy it. That's all I ask. ++ Leah ++ Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... [This message has been edited by chasing rain (edited 09-20-2001).] |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
great poem very well written. robin bye lizzy,javi,acire,cherish,SEA,vicky,laura,andrea,jessa and anyone else i forgot i will be back to torment you soon muhahahahahahaha |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful discriptions and imagery is wOWish...a lot went behind this, as i can tell from all your wonderful poems...enjoyed GREATLY, Leah..  if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry- |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Another wonderful poem written by you. I really liked it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
You'll be glad to know that I did enjoy it. I'm going to have to read this more than once to fully understand it but the way it's written is well and will obviously have a deeper meaning in there. You're going to make me find it, aren't you?! lol  Thanks for sharing and I'm off to read the others now. ~AF~ Please put waste in a bin |
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XFalloutX Junior Member
since 2001-05-13
Posts 31NC |
*claps* =) hehe...wow Leah...hehe =)....oh...where are you I'm bored right now and could use someone to talk to. Buh-bye |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm not sure what this is about, but I do have an idea So, I'm asking for your help for a little explanation of the poem thanks hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is about the crucifiction of Christ, right? lol, I'm still trying to get it hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
It's great I'm always myslef. Isn't that enough for you? |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Yay Acire! *apple sauce [applause]* You got it! Wow, was it that hard?  Sowwy.  |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I was just making sure hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
 Hey! I really like this poem..good job!  ~*~Life is only worth living once if you've found someone worth dying for~*~ |
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