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TrueLUV
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0 posted 2001-09-19 11:42 PM


The mystic skys with moons a many
I look up far towards them
The stars are shinning knowing unwillingly that they will eventually extinguish
And now the sun
So warm and bright
Without it, it only leads to endless night
So we must harness its power and marvel at its beauty
For without the big bright star of fire
Life would only be a desire if not a figment of imagination
Life would discontinue
Time would finally stop
And all the gates of heaven would crumble
Yet the gates would still be open
Its like wisemen they a many have said the road to heaven is always available and the journey to God is never too late to start
Even hell would feel this wrath
It would freeze over
And life would freeze with the completion of this dark cycle
Leavin nothing in its path
No present, not a future
Life is over
This journey is so brutle


[This message has been edited by TrueLUV (edited 09-21-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-09-20 05:10 PM


Hey, I noticed this lonely post so i read it, and im very glad i did! Very nice poem!!!

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2 posted 2001-09-21 12:20 PM


great poem very well written.
robin

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